Somes days leave spring reminders
From a table, the day wilts beneath a freshly pulled chair, its roots left behind pale to think of. Another spent flower to pick up, their once beautiful uprights show now unnaturally askew. A sense...
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nicely done Matt, though it seems a word might be missing in the first line of that last verse .. perhaps its just the way I read it... based on the picture at the top, I presume Rg
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Love the personification in this Matt. It's a beautiful spring-like day here in Long Beach.
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That opening stanze pulled me in, and yes, I was left in awe of your talent and inner soul!! Wonderful piece of writing and bravo Matt~
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RG, Jewel and twi, thank you. I've revised this poem so many times, and hopefully improved it from what it was.
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ah, wilted roots and days gone by even spring is subject to entropy...
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Will, or should I call you Wilt with your lack of current posting powers, thanks for reading this load of ol' nonesense.
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I liked the first ending better ("and winter covered less than a chair"), it was much stronger. The rest is excellent!!!! *bows*
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